‘The Deuce’ Series Premiere Recap: No Such Thing as a Free Breakfast

Sep 10, 2017 · 46 comments
AH (middle earth)
Thought I commnted last week but guess not, so will continue watching as it's just been renewed, and it is Simon, but do wish the sets showed the true grittiness of the streets back in the 1970s: no pooper scooper laws in 1971. Just simple wildlife stuff. Dogs, pigeons. The sex I find tedious. I loathe anything that in any fashion glamorizes pimps so...how to do this and not do that and not be racist and not be clichė...good luck with that.
alan (los angeles, ca)
Sex always sells. Even sleazy sex.
Jim (Chicago)
Really enjoyed this pilot, which I was looking forward to. Unlike other commenters here I like the look and feel of 1970's NY, and it looks gritty and dirty. Although it does look like Mean Streets, that is fine with me. I noticed a lot of attention to detail and there was obviously a lot of time and money invested in the sets. I was a little taken aback by the identical twins, they look a little too much alike. But overall, a great pilot I will enjoy watching.
Chris (California)
Very gritty and realistic, but the characters are being developed right away. I'm a big fan of "The Wire" so I won't miss this. Gyllenhaal is great.
Brian in Denver (Denver, Colorado)
If there's a hearing aid manufacturer perusing this comment section, we should be seeing some clever placement advertising in an upcoming episode.
Elizabeth Fuller (Peterborough, New Hampshire)
I loved "The Wire" and think "Ray Donovan" is well done, but I've stopped watching the latter and will not tune into "The Deuce." I've gotten to the point where I'm asking myself if I really want to know these people. I used to shake my head when others blamed everything on Obama, but now I'm doing the same thing with Trump. My hesitancy to emotionally invest in the lives of fictional characters living in the underbelly of society has got to have something to do with my inability to deal with the reality of the Trump presidency. I'm not yet ready for reruns of "The Waltons," but neither am I ready for "The Deuce." Luckily we now have "This Is Us."
malamoi (NC)
I couldn't get through the latest season of House of Cards. With the Trump kleptocracy, the treasonous dealings with Russia, watching democracy undermined and our standing in the world plummeting, I couldn't enjoy the show anymore.
Keith G (Boca Raton, FL)
The streets were too clean, the cars were all the latest models, buffed and polished for a floor show, the costumes were perfectly pressed and fitted (even on the supposedly poor kids) and the sets looked like, well, sets. The dialogue was all cleaned up without any feel for the street nor any convincing NYC accents (MG's was particularly affected), all politically correct and safe. For someone like David Simon, whose grittiness and realism are second to none (The Wire especially) this has to rank as a major disappointment. I didn't believe it was 1971 for a second, I believed it was a bunch of actors dressed up as 1970s characters spouting non-period dialogue on a bunch of sets dressed up with 1970s props and store signs. In order for this show to work, I have to feel like I have been time- warped...I did, but not to NYC 1971...to Hollywood 2017 P.S. Tug McGraw was a relief pitcher he rarely started a Mets Game. Symbolic of the necessary details this show badly lacks.
alan (los angeles, ca)
You can't feel fear on the other side of a TV.
JOELEEH (nyc)
I lived 20 blocks from Times Square in the 70s and I thought it did a really good job of looking right, although not perfect. It's like even the producers don't comprehend how filthy the streets really were, so you're right on that. And yes, getting something as obvious as who would be starting for the Mets so wrong was jarring. Even younger baseball fans know Tug wasn't a starter. That was tacky.
Dikran Tulaine (New Jersey)
No! Wait! Please! I have another truckload of cliches and complete lack of humor outside! Yes! In a truck! On the street! Yeah! How much? Wholesale? Yes, ok, wholesale.
Vivian (New York)
Where are the drugs? Why do these women need a pimp? I see no benefit. I always believed that the pimps got these girls addicted in order to control them. This series hasn't shown that. Too sanitized, maybe??
JR (Providence, RI)
"Early on, Vinnie has a gash on the right side of his forehead, after getting pistol-whipped for his brother’s debts. "
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Vinnie wasn't pistol-whipped for his brother's debts. He had just deposited the night's take from the bar when two would-be robbers held him up. Although he had no cash, they made him beg for his life and knocked him to the ground.

To the producers' credit, the premiere managed to set the right tone and to introduce multiple, three-dimensional characters without marginalizing any of them -- unveiling personal and compelling details about 1971 Times Square and starting to flesh out each of the players. They captured the zeitgeist for sure. Looking forward to future episodes.
Another County Heard From (Lawrenceville NJ)
The "Greyhound bus station" is the Port Authority Bus Terminal
professor (nc)
You can tell from the comments who is a member of David Simon's cult and who isn't. David takes his time building up the plot and developing characters so patience is a must. If the Wire is any indication, we are in for some excellent storytelling!
max buda (Los Angeles)
I worked Times Square in 68 & 69. A little too early for this series but almost everything was already in place. There was an upstairs place on the street with girls dancing in the window to never ending loud rock music. The drinks were watered and the girls went on "breaks" with customers under the watchful eyes of muscle bound goons. The top floor was a flat out casino with a small private elevator. The show has everything right except for conveying how dirty everything was and the horrible day and night stench. Most of the cops I saw then were also very involved in "looking out" for the establishment and it's "customers".
Harry Lime (New York, NY)
I was very disappointed with the pilot. The themes and the visuals were outrageous cliches,right out of Taxi Driver and Mean Streets. I've seen those films, numerous times, thank you, and I was hoping for something fresher. There is only one Martin Scorsese and we don't need a less talented one.
Sid (H-Town)
Absolutely compelling! O' if it could only be streamed! I was 30 & hip again. Soul music had recently evolved from it's roots, R&B of the '50's & '60's. Sound track to die for. CC, I knew you back then and never understood how you could attract those fine women. But a key line in the 1st episode explained it. "I need a pimp bc I'm lazy.". HBO, Treme was great, but this series shows it real & unvarnished. The trash bags on the sidewalk, the drizzling, dirty rain, the cheap wigs, the Wops, the Bros, the not so naive White naifs, I'm hooked. The Deuce. Let it ride.
drotars (los angeles)
it was as compelling as watching someone torture an animal.
Anonymous American (USA)
Meh. Not sure it's lived up to the critical hype just yet. I'll probably keep watching it as long as I maintain my HBO subscription, but I find I'm not eagerly awaiting the next episode as I do with many other shows.

The acting was generally good, especially Franco's performance, but the characters were frankly not that compelling. The same old small-time hustlers and hookers, two-faced pimps and down-to-earth cops, working-class dads and backstabbing wives... I've seen these stories a million times before. Why should I care about this particular take on them? Where is the plot going? What was the inciting incident here?

Of course the recreation of 1970s New York was exceedingly well done, though I can't help wondering if this show was greenlit just so HBO could repurpose the sets and costumes from the disappointing "Vinyl." And it always bugs me when period pieces fail to capture the way people from a different era actually talked. The writers and actors seemingly put little effort into trying to emulate the idioms, accents, and speech patterns of the 1970s -- all the dialogue was peppered with excessive swearing and modern-day slang. Not convincing.
Into the Cool (NYC)
Had trouble hearing all the back and forth dialog. Glad its not just my hearing. WTH! What's going on with the sound recording.
JR (Providence, RI)
It might be helpful to watch with captions, especially for scenes with dialogue playing over background noise or music.
Nicole (Falls Church)
I find much of the dialog on HBO shows is difficult to hear, I end up either listening though my stereo or headphones.
LMG (New York, NY)
It was sooooo slooooooow. I thought they could have made all the same points about the same characters in half the time. A show about the 70s does not require horrible 70s movie pacing. And I think they need a whole lot more female writers to get involved, because all of the prostitutes came off as movie cliches, not real women - right down to the wise prostitute (A Tale of Two Cities? Really?) and the prostitute just trying to make some money for her kid the only way she can (what, she couldn't live with her mom and get a waitressing job?). Not to mention the college student story arc was totally unbelievable. If she's so smart and didn't want the drugs for herself, she never would have gotten out of the car.

I really wanted to love it because I adore The Wire and Treme, but I was not a fan of the first episode. I hope it gets better.
Vincenzo (Northern NJ)
"...and the prostitute just trying to make some money for her kid the only way she can (what, she couldn't live with her mom and get a waitressing job?)"

Couple of things indicated (to me, anyway) that there were issues between MG's Candy and her father: (1) when her mother called and informed Candy that her father wasn't home, and, although not explicitly stated, it was okay for Candy to visit her son; (2) on the street when one of the girls describes a fellow sex worker as having "daddy issues", to which one of the others retorts, "don't we all?"; at that moment the camera cuts to Candy, not a close-up, and a little out of focus, but she occupies most of the frame.

I may have some details wrong, but that was the feeling I got....
Julio (Las Vegas)
The opening episode is a reminder of just how much character development "Game of Thrones" had to sacrifice this past season to speed the plot along and to provide for several large CGI set pieces. Just about every scene was a delight in its own right, and I appreciated the depth and complexity provided to characters, large and small. In terms of influences, I found the delightful initial introduction of Frankie as he goes about his business walking the street to be highly reminiscent of the scene in Ralph Bakshi's "American Pop" of Tony (or is it his son Pete?) dealing drugs on the streets of New York, set to the tune of the Sex Pistols' "Pretty Vacant." And having gone to school in NYC in the late 1970s, the portrayal of the griminess and sleaze was sufficiently accurate to make anyone yearning for the "old Times Square" before it became a Disney-fied (well, ok, I don't think there are any "desnudas" in Disney World) tourist attraction. I also remember, from those same college days, the early cable "Ugly George" show ("goils, goils, goils") seemingly on almost every night on the floor television set of my freshman dorm. Presumably, that is the type of sleazy porn world that "The Deuce" will be exploring.
Chris (DC)
Julio wrote:" ... just how much character development "Game of Thrones" had to sacrifice this past season to speed the plot along."

Oh please, spare us the claim about the alleged sacrifice of "character development" on GoT this past season. Recall, you're talking season seven, meaning GoT has had six seasons to develop its characters. It was long past due to get the narrative moving.
Conrad Skinner (Santa Fe)
The collector character has an easy resemblance to Harvey Keitel.
Artboy (L A)
Shallow waters here. No texture whatsoever. Obvious sets, not locations. All the actors look as if they came straight from wardrobe. I was in NYC at that time and it was scary. This 42 is like high school.
Brazilianheat (Palm Springs, CA)
I was there also and didn't find it scary at all. Exhilarating is more like it. Hanging out in Times Square at night and watching the freakilicious transformation as the well dressed characters left the Broadway shows and were replaced by the "underworld" denizens, are some of my favorite and most energized memories of New York.
Bill (Devon, Pa.)
Not to sound like an old guy awed by digital technology, but The Deuce visually depicts that time in New York so convincingly that you can almost feel the grit under your feet and smell the gasoline-leaded air.
Michael (Houston)
Agreed, the CGI art direction deserves a Nobel prize.
Bloomdog (Cleveland, OH)
I caught the first episode, via a reviewers copy, aggregated by www.mycouchtuner.ag about two weeks ago, and the audio was just as horrid as the official release.
I only made it through the first 20-minutes or so before giving up.
Looks like a show I'll wait on to binge watch the complete this winter during a weekend blizzard.
oakie (SF Bay Area)
The reviewer makes an incisive connection between Vinnie and Frankie and Charlie and Johnny Boy. Same time, different hoods, but both filled with the rituals of their streets. If Be My Baby or the Stones's' "Tell Me" show up, I'll appreciate the creator's homage.
SmootZero (Cape may nj)
Brilliant. I'm hooked already. So so glad to have another david Simon show to savor. Thank you HBO
Michael Walsh (Ossining,NY)
Really enjoyed it and overall the casting is excellent.

As a New Yorker, I was amazed at how realistic- and grim- they made1971 Times Square etc. look .

One comment regarding the conversation around a bet being made on the Mets -to my knowledge Tug McGraw was only a relief pitcher and not a starter .
Bill (Charlotte)
Regarding the dialogue, I wound up turning on the closed captioning.

Slower start than I would like but I think back to Episode 1, Season 1 of The Wire and I thought it started similarly. We shall see how it progresses.

Sound track is excellent!
Laura (Mansfield, OH)
I am willing to give this series time to develop, out of respect for the writers who gave us the complex characters and gritty realism of The Wire. I caught most of the dialogue, and I'm intrigued by the way things are being set up. I'm interested in how the women and James Franco will be tested and show their vulnerability and strength as the various players did in The Wire. As a child of the 70's, I love how the soundtrack comments on the show's themes. Haven't heard Treat Her Like a Lady in years, and I loved the irony of it in this context.
Adrienne (Virginia)
I thought this was an unusally slow start to a series. While it's great to see what will probably be all our main players intersect and the lives of quiet desperation they all lead, I kept waiting for someone to allude to the solution.
JR (Providence, RI)
The solution? To prostitution, porn, and crime?

This was only episode one!
Katie (Seattle, WA)
I enjoyed it and found it well-acted and engrossing. I also had a problem with hearing some of the dialog and feel that sometimes the audio wasn't quite high enough. I mentioned this to my boyfriend after the show. I really was impressed with the trashy look of Times Square and the characters with their juxtaposition to each other, making the story come together and lead me into it. I was amazed at how great an acting job James Franco did, especially when he played two parts in the same scene, and it was incredibly realistic filmmaking. I think it's going to be a good series...it's got good bones!
Into the Cool (NYC)
Take it from one who was there at the time - Cars and clothes look right but streets were never that clean and hookers never looked that good.
NativeNewYorker (NYC)
Enjoyed the premiere episode, but I'd like to know if anyone else had trouble hearing a lot of the dialogue. I'm noticing this in several shows lately. Thoughts?
Chris (DC)
Use closed caption. My hearing is fine, but frankly I can't make head or tails of some dialogue - especially slang - on any number of shows without subtitles.
suzanne (New York, NY)
I found the audio quality quite lacking.

Mean Streets was a singular accomplishment. The comparison doesn't seem remotely justifiable.

IT was an ordeal to sit through this program.
David Wolf (Washington, DC)
I thought it was HBO's best pilot in years, laying the groundwork for what will become another complex and richly textured work from David Simon. As for Tobias's Mean Streets comparison, it seemed limited to the relationship dynamics of the main characters and struck me as a perceptive and accurate insight. Of course there's no sense in comparing a series pilot (even one clocking in at nearly 90 minutes) to a movie that tells its entire story in that amount of time.

Even if you found watching the episode an ordeal, one lesson from "The Wire" is that a Simon series in particular should not be judged by its opening chapter.